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« Thread Started on Dec 27, 2005, 8:24pm »
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[Josh]
Why?
Oh why did I have to sit beside her?!
The only girl I loved , and ever loved, a touching distance away.

I quickly snuck a peek at her, and it nearly took my breath away. She is a GODESS!! I mean...a really beautiful godess.

She probably doesn't even know I'm here...just another punk from middle school.

But this isn't going to be middle school.

I swear I'll have Sarah by the end of the year!

But how?


[Kate]
Oh...another BORING day.

What shall I do?

OMG..it's Sarah Mitchell...what a stuck up walking piece of Barbie drool she is.

Who is she trying to impress....with that fat head of hers...the only thing she could impress would be an elephant!

Whatever...hmmmm...is that Josh!?!?

Geeez...I guess puberty does that to you.

He used to be such a dweeb, but we somehow lost in touch during summer.

I've got to talk to him....the Hall Rangers have to reunite once again!

Hmmm...who's he looking at?

Oh....Sarah....what a ninny...it's called a pencil sweety...not a baton!

Ugh! What a tintillating day THIS is going to be.


[Josh]

What can I do?

Oh you idiot....talking to yourself isn't going to win Sarah over..I mean...she needs a man...not a mental dweeb!!

Okay..focus...be cool.

Don't SQUIRM!!

Allright...hey..isn't that Kate?

Great...finally, someone that I can talk too!

Wow....is Sarah looking at me?

Wait..never mind...she's looking at Steven...not me....never me......SOOO not me.

What an EXCITING day this is gonna be.....


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« Reply #1 on Dec 27, 2005, 11:04pm »
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I like it so far! It's interesting!
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« Reply #2 on Dec 27, 2005, 11:27pm »
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*lunch*

[Kate]

Could this dude go any slower?

Might as well talk to myself.....

Hmmm....where's Josh?

Does he have my lunch?

{Is that you Kate?}

Who's that?

OMG..Josh!!

What am I going to say...how am I going to act.

Well stupid...talk for goodness sakes!!

TALK you dunce.

Okay!!

{Hey Josh, long time no see...so are the hallways secure?}

I hope this smile is "charming".

Nope, my hands are itching....very BAD sign.

What am I going to do?

Got it!

{Hey Josh, how about we hang out in the mall this week?}
{That sounds great Kate...but I've got....business to do.}
{HA!! Your kidding right?}
{Nope...just "business......to do....}
{Does that "business" have anything to do with Miss Cow of the Universe?}
{HEY!! Sarah isn't a cow!}
{So I am right...huh?}
{Well....ummmmm.....ugh...wellll}

Wow...is he blushing?
Cute...very cute...

[Josh]
I so don't wan't to have this conversation right now...not now...not ever.

{Ummm..Kate...allright...if I tell you...will you promise to help...and not ridicule?}
She looks so nervous, and embarassed.
{Josh, you know me better than that....what can Safety Rangerette do for you sir?}

Haha...funny, good old Kate....well not "old"....but growing?
What beautiful eyes....
Blue...azure....pretty....Oh CRUD!!

Reload dude..reload...

Oh yeah!!

{So Kate..my mission..should you choose to accept it...... is to win Sarah Mitchel over!}

Whoa...she looks so shocked...scared...nauseauted??

{You okay?}

Where's she going?

Oh...the girls room......crap...crap...crap...what a day...


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« Reply #3 on Dec 28, 2005, 3:57pm »
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*Morning*

[Josh]

I wonder where Kate is....I hope she's okay...she didn't look good at all yesterday.

Why does she hate Sarah so much?

Wait there's SARAH!!

She's talking to Kate?

Haha....this is going to be funny...well....scary also....

[Kate]

OMG...I'm such a loser...I can't believe I almost barfed in front of Josh yesterday.

I hate it that he's going to give away his heart to that...thing people call a model. UGH!!

I'm going to barf again.

Oh NO!! It's Josh...play cool Katie...play cool...

Hmm....I'll give him....the cold shoulder!!

That's it!!
Perfect......
Okay....something to preoccupy me.......Ahhh!

Reading...reading is always good.

Hmmm....wow, this book is great

{Excuse me girl}

huh?

{Oh!! Hey Sarah....how're you doing?}

OMG....she's a pyschic also....a psychic COW, more like it.

Please...stop trying to pull your skirt up any higher honey...you look skankier than usual.

{So...what do you need Sarah??}

You need a brown paper bag....that's what you need, you hag.

{Oh...nothing, I'm just wondering if you could help me....I need girl help....}

You also need a good ol' can of whup ass too!

{He he...ummmm.....you need girl help?}

Why doesn't she leave me alone?

{Well, I want you to help me hook up with Steve.....Steve Williams..you know him right?}

Who wouldn't Barbie....

OMG...you need my help?

I can't even help myself!

What to do?



[Josh]

What're they talking about?

Kate keeps looking at Steve...but why is Sarah talking to her?

WAIT!!

Maybe they're talking about me...maybe Kate's going to help me.....!!

Hmmm...I wonder.....

{Ring Ring}

Time to go...first period...I've got to talk to Kate..
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« Reply #4 on Dec 28, 2005, 7:13pm »
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People talking to themselves?? What a concept. I'm anxious to see where this is going.
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